3/29/12 I hurried to write our history down As you walked out the door So that perhaps this way Time won't steal your Face away Since Distance has already done enough
There's a feeling that distance is like a knife chipping away at the relationship, and the poetic persona is aware that they are holding on to what is already gone. That's what makes it sad. Well penned.
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Nice one!:)
Very sad write...distance kills relationship very quickly ~
Yearning and sadness for what might be lost pervades this piece.
webcam? videophone? I guess this is one of those aspects of life where technology does serve to alleviate suffering and build bridges.
Lovely read. It's a bit sad.
Oh so sad - but nicely written!
Anna :o]
There's a feeling that distance is like a knife chipping away at the relationship, and the poetic persona is aware that they are holding on to what is already gone. That's what makes it sad. Well penned.
so heartbreaking and beautiful.
I like how it gets so directly to the point. The whole poem is the point. Very nice. Every word is utterly important.
I can feel this. Well done.
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