Saturday, April 7, 2012

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3/29/12
I hurried to write our history down
As you walked out the door
So that perhaps this way
Time won't steal your
Face away
Since Distance has already done enough

10 comments:

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice one!:)

Heaven said...

Very sad write...distance kills relationship very quickly ~

Kim Nelson said...

Yearning and sadness for what might be lost pervades this piece.

Abin Chakraborty said...

webcam? videophone? I guess this is one of those aspects of life where technology does serve to alleviate suffering and build bridges.

Chevrefeuille said...

Lovely read. It's a bit sad.

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Oh so sad - but nicely written!

Anna :o]

Adura Ojo said...

There's a feeling that distance is like a knife chipping away at the relationship, and the poetic persona is aware that they are holding on to what is already gone. That's what makes it sad. Well penned.

Laura said...

so heartbreaking and beautiful.

M. A. S. said...

I like how it gets so directly to the point. The whole poem is the point. Very nice. Every word is utterly important.

PattiKen said...

I can feel this. Well done.