Stuff that finds its way from my pen(cil) to the paper.
Oh, I love this!
Mmm...conflict - doesn't bode well for the future!
a story waiting to unfold.....
Short and sweet (maybe not so sweet), very good!
made me wonder what the story is behind this story... lovely piece!
Seems things are going towards things negative. Both ought to be careful then! Nicely Laura!Hank
Wow... I feel zapped! Such a powerful piece in a small punch.
I can relate to this. Succinctly put.
if only people could be more honest...
interesting ...nicely put!
Short and meaningful, thank you for the poem.
Now that could be any of us speaking... you could almost claim it as a found poem. But no worse for that. Quite the reverse.
I adore concision filled with meaning. I adore this.
The heart-breaking truth, yes? But how to detect if the words are true?
I wonder how many times I have thought this very thought. Wonderful poem.
Ouch...I love the sass in this one!Well done Merry Christmas to you n' yours!
I want more!YOU have captured curiosity n' wonderwell done :D
yaa...true ppl always have limits of not hurting others by mere saying anything that doesn't mean..
Hey, it's been a while since the last time I was a here, you have been absent some time now, I hope you're all right and everything is fine with your life, greetings and I'm one of the readers that misses you :)
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