Saturday, August 18, 2012

OSI - Lopsided

This week at OSI the prompt is lopsided. To read the other contributions or join in go here.

Imperfection is
Beauty shining in your sweet
But lopsided smile

22 comments:

Harshad Mehta said...

immediately famous smile of Mona Lisa
comes to mind.
Well done.

Pranita said...

That's so sweet!! Imperfect beauty is a delight!

Peekaboo with the moon!

Jennifer Wagner said...

I love it! Love lop-sided smiles :) Sweet haiku!

Anonymous said...

After reading Harshad's comment, I cannot help but think of the Mona Lisa, too.

Dennis Go said...

This is short but beautiful!

Ramesh Sood said...

I am happy to be reading posts with lopsided smiles.. good one..

RS:)

Janine Bollée said...

Very hard to accommodate words like that. You did well.

Mary said...

Love what you did with this, showing that indeed beauty CAN be found in imperfection.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Perfection is overrated. Nicely put.

Gillena Cox said...

enjoyed

much love..

Amrit Sinha said...

Smiles everywhere :-)

joanne said...

I am now smiling my lop-sided smile, too....No imperfection in your verse!

Oak Creek Ranch said...

A lop-sided smile is much warmer and more endearing than a perfect one.

Jim said...

That's soooo nice a thought, Laura.
My smirk is lopsided. ;) I smile a lot, my nickname used to be 'Smiley.'
..

Anonymous said...

a beautiful lopsided smile...lovely

Maude Lynn said...

Beautifully done!

Sharp Little Pencil said...

Yes, the lopsided smile is the smile I trust. Not full of oneself, nor showing every tooth in that Julia Roberts shiny perfection. Riley (daughter) has a terrific smile, like that, and it's so telling, because her spirit is humble. Loved this, first time here from United. Peace, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/08/20/three-hymns-naming-constellations/

Ruchi Jain said...

profound..:)

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

A beautiful response to the prompt.

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Beautiful little write!!

Unknown said...

Beautifully done.
Mine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Laura Maria,

Beautiful words, which made the lopsided smile all the more interesting:)

Eileen