When I look at you
I feel the same way
As when I look at
A notebook's empty pages
Unbridled inspiration takes over
And dreams begin to form
I get the feeling that nothing is impossible
As I hold in my hand the course of words
For when I look at you
There is nothing in the world I need
Except you
To fill these empty pages
23 comments:
I really enjoyed each verse. The metaphor of the notebook and the lover is so magnificent. Beautiful poem.
Beautiful. Love the way empty pages are symbolized as clean loving heart.
This is so so beautiful! I love it! I actually stumbled across this coming to look at your WoW re-write exercise but I'm so glad I saw this. Just beautiful, really resonated with me.
Beautiful work done.
Just beautiful my friend. You got it just right.
Melanie
nice!!
Loved the picture and the words!
enjoyed it.
as if you are speaking to me.
welcome share your poetry talent with us this week.
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fabulous poetry blog.
what a beauty this poem is full of love and hope.
Sounds like love.
Hello.
Beautiful expressions of love.
Like your image too.
Thanks for sharing.
Thief In The Night
This one is brimming with excitement and hope for the future! You seem to be in love :-)
Beautiful sentiments! Well expressed deep feelings.
Very nice.
I feel the emptiness of the page...very melancholic write..nice one ~
Beautiful poem!! Loved the thought and the inspiration.
lovely read.nothing serves as better inspiration for creation than love.
Love. Commitment. Hope. All tied up in a tidy little poem.
nice verse. ♥
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Very nicely written as any great love story should be, may your pages always be full!
Love is beautiful as is the poem.
Anna :o]
what a romantic piece! love make words mean nothing at all.
love it :)
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