Monday, September 12, 2011

Notebook

This week's prompt from OSI is Notebook. Join in or read the other contributions here













When I look at you
I feel the same way
As when I look at
A notebook's empty pages

Unbridled inspiration takes over
And dreams begin to form
I get the feeling that nothing is impossible
As I hold in my hand the course of words

For when I look at you
There is nothing in the world I need
Except you
To fill these empty pages

23 comments:

The Write Girl said...

I really enjoyed each verse. The metaphor of the notebook and the lover is so magnificent. Beautiful poem.

Harshad mehta said...

Beautiful. Love the way empty pages are symbolized as clean loving heart.

Sheri Bomb said...

This is so so beautiful! I love it! I actually stumbled across this coming to look at your WoW re-write exercise but I'm so glad I saw this. Just beautiful, really resonated with me.

Kremo said...

Beautiful work done.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just beautiful my friend. You got it just right.


Melanie

sandra said...

nice!!

WyomingDiva said...

Loved the picture and the words!

Morning said...

enjoyed it.

as if you are speaking to me.

The Gooseberry Garden said...

welcome share your poetry talent with us this week.

we are open until Thursday, 8pm.

fabulous poetry blog.

Cynthia said...

what a beauty this poem is full of love and hope.

Old Raven said...

Sounds like love.

Andy said...

Hello.
Beautiful expressions of love.
Like your image too.

Thanks for sharing.

Thief In The Night

indiwriter said...

This one is brimming with excitement and hope for the future! You seem to be in love :-)

Mary said...

Beautiful sentiments! Well expressed deep feelings.

booguloo said...

Very nice.

Heaven said...

I feel the emptiness of the page...very melancholic write..nice one ~

Vyankatesh said...

Beautiful poem!! Loved the thought and the inspiration.

Abin Chakraborty said...

lovely read.nothing serves as better inspiration for creation than love.

Kim Nelson said...

Love. Commitment. Hope. All tied up in a tidy little poem.

magicinthebackyard said...

nice verse. ♥

http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/keys-ethree/

rch said...

Very nicely written as any great love story should be, may your pages always be full!

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Love is beautiful as is the poem.

Anna :o]

mpucukilalang said...

what a romantic piece! love make words mean nothing at all.
love it :)