Stuff that finds its way from my pen(cil) to the paper.
Romance doesn't usually tolerate half measures. Yes, we do want to be swept away by love.
This is a wonderful poem ... clean, wonderful economy of words that perfectly illustrates "hollow talk" Bravo
At times when we find everything meaningless , really we wish to be far far away from this world.
ah so true....give me something...or someone....that has a little depth....smiles.
love should be just that :)
Hollowness is not what I would desire either.Glad to see you again at Poets United!
We do not want hollowness yet it takes faith to accept to be engulfed.
beautiful… yes, yes how much more tender, vulnerable, engaged, connected to dive in deep together.
can't help but link the photo to your words. such a short poem but with so much depth.
So many platitudes are just that, we want all of our truth to be expressed.
To be hollow and shallow is not want we want.. engulf us with deepness.
It may help to tell them off. That way the relationship sustains with lots of respect. Nicely Maria!Hank
Ha, my comment disappeared......I love the line "I dont want shallow waters"....yes, plunge in! Well said.
Yes, we all want depth. I like how succinctly you put this.
YES! How beautifully your words provide the substance of your desire with no hollow words!
sometimes we long for words with substance and not just hollow talk. great thought on this sabbath day. Amen!Jamztomajamztoma.blogspot.com
Hollow talk is a time waster for sure.
Short and sweet!ZQ
So relatable. Love this.
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