Stuff that finds its way from my pen(cil) to the paper.
This is just superb. :)
How beautiful. The last line will linger in my mind for a long time.
the pitter, patter of the rain, and the hammering in the heart
simple thoughts means really a lot!
Your words open onto a secret world of love and comfort in a sometimes hostile world - water monsters! I loved it.
A beautifully haunting poem!
deep. deeper than it looks. may that hand be a keeper.
lovely indeed.rains have this strange tendency to flood the heart with love longing and loss.
That is a very pretty thought.
Lovely, lovely poetry. You have such a delightful energy of passion. Stay Creative!
This was well written! Thank you for sharing!-Erick Flores
Beautifully penned thoughts - minimalist, I love it. What's important, remains...
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