Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Rainy Season

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April thoughts
We stand under the rain
Hand in hand
Waiting

Though many have been here
Their faces blur into
Water monsters
Your hand alone remains

15 comments:

Dennis Go said...

This is just superb. :)

madhumakhi said...

How beautiful. The last line will linger in my mind for a long time.

sayan said...

the pitter, patter of the rain, and the hammering in the heart

Unnamed Psalmist said...

simple thoughts means really a lot!

Kerry O'Connor said...

Your words open onto a secret world of love and comfort in a sometimes hostile world - water monsters! I loved it.

Mary Mansfield said...

A beautifully haunting poem!

Morning said...

amazing writing.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Lovely.

Olive Tree said...

deep. deeper than it looks. may that hand be a keeper.

Abin Chakraborty said...

lovely indeed.rains have this strange tendency to flood the heart with love longing and loss.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Poignant!

M.C. said...

That is a very pretty thought.

John Evans said...

Lovely, lovely poetry. You have such a delightful energy of passion. Stay Creative!

eflores said...

This was well written! Thank you for sharing!
-Erick Flores

turtlememoir said...

Beautifully penned thoughts - minimalist, I love it. What's important, remains...