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| image from weheartit I hid myself away While you were busy naming stars And chasing dreams you never dreamed But only copied down |
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| image from weheartit I hid myself away While you were busy naming stars And chasing dreams you never dreamed But only copied down |
12 comments:
Sometimes we learn so much about ourselves and others when we hide away. The photograph complimented the words beautifully. Best wishes. Jeff.
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
Ps:Thanks for welcoming me back. xx
Love the poem, short, insightful, full of regret, I think, for not having seen the truth earlier... yeah, great title too.
Solitude is good for the soul. I know I enjoy mine.
poignantly beautiful
Very poignant. "while you were busy chasing stars......"
To be sometimes alone and all with yourself ... that can give you so much energy.
Lovely poem.
Namaste
Oh, I really like this! It's super pretty and it makes me think! Very well done, beautifully executed! :^)
I see a gifted writer in your words. Beautifully penned.
A thought provoking poem...sometimes I think we are too pre-occupied with chasing dreams, we forget ourselves and loved ones ~
I felt such sadness for both characters. One hid self, the other never found it.
Wonderful poem...and great picture/photo. It fits almost perfectly.
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