Sunday, October 23, 2011

Sitting alone listening to the silence - Carry On Tuesday

This week for Carry On Tuesday the prompt is "sitting alone listening to the silence".


Sitting alone listening to the silence
Isn't unbearable
As long as I
Am thinking of you
And every feature of your face
That I have come to love


Sitting here alone
Isn't a waste of time
Because I can contemplate
How we came to be
And how we are
Like two pieces of the same puzzle

9 comments:

keiths ramblings said...

By the sound of it, your relaionship certainly 'aint no puzzle! What a lovely poem. Thanks so much for contributing to Carry On Tuesday. Pieces like this make it all worthwhile for me. You promised another one in your comment - can't wait!

Kenia Cris said...

I like the poems produced under the influence of love. ;-)

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice poem:)

Lolamouse said...

Lovely. Sometimes I enjoy sitting alone in the silence-wish there were more of it!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Lovely love poem and yes silence is sometimes a gift.


Melanie

Mike Patrick said...

Sharing silence with someone you love: priceless.

Mikha said...

Beautiful :) I really like the way you wrote, because your poetry is short but it says so much! :)

Kremo said...

Good one !!!

indiwriter said...

lovely.. an honest poem..