7/14/11
I sat down to write a poem about you
and to discover how I feel
The strangest thing,
the words wouldn't come
So I went outside
and took a walk
Perhaps then my heart would feel
But strangely,
the world was still
I walked on listening
to the music of the world
Hoping it would show me what to feel
As strange as me,
the trees went silent
So I took out
an old photograph of you
Maybe then I'd be able to feel
Strange though,
it was no longer you
9 comments:
what a lovely poem
I read feels of yearning mixed with sadness here. Excellent ending. Well expressed
Wow, well done. The ending really hits it home.
Everything I read today is all too relevant. I love the Yeats quote as your blog's subtitle. Reeling a bit trampled myself lately. Your progression in the poem is careful, subtle and delicate. I like how it ended too. Life doesn't guarantee happy endings.
A photograph always marks a place in time. I can see how it wasn't the same person anymore. Very nice.
nice ending
I like such simple, direct language in poetry.
you say things so succinctly!
http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/11/blooming.html
amazing one.
:)
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