Saturday, July 9, 2011

Songs from the Night

5/11/11
The thoughts are swirling around in my head
And I cannot seem to string them together
They seem incomplete and empty
These thoughts of you
Incomprehensible, unreal
Yet you are my reality
But who are you?
To you I have no name
We are both shadows
Shapeless on the wall
Unseen, unheard
But you have a song
While I am merely colorless dust

5 comments:

The Poet said...

Hello.
WoW! Thought-provoking expressions!
I like the ending.

Thanks for sharing.

Bashful Lady

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Lauramaria,

Very nicely written. I love relating to shadows and the mystery of them!

Eileen

Scarlet said...

Seems like a sad and poignant post.. a merely colorless dust - connotes a meaningless existence.

Happy sunday ~

Morning said...

superb.

what a treat to be here.

Hyde Park Poetry Palace said...

welcome becoming part of us today.

any poem is welcome.