tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post5897895797434452547..comments2023-05-13T03:40:37.523-05:00Comments on Paper Thoughts: Fool's ParadiseLaura Mariahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-89831827804103741712011-12-06T16:16:44.252-06:002011-12-06T16:16:44.252-06:00"Fool's Paradise," I can see you hav..."Fool's Paradise," I can see you have touched so many hearts and souls. This has been one of the subject matters that reaches out to folks and draws us in. We have all felt the loneliness, and in my poetry, I speak of the darkness in terms of that loneliness; however, the other side can be right around the corner of believing and faith. Just wondered if you had a poem of such nature because I feel you would write something beautiful. I was only wondering...your poetry is very elegant, creative and powerful; much grace you embrace...thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the visit.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-64678903022775756292011-12-01T09:54:40.742-06:002011-12-01T09:54:40.742-06:00Poignant and wistful. If only dreams came true... ...Poignant and wistful. If only dreams came true... A fool's paradise, indeed. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-10655722284203996692011-11-28T21:10:16.106-06:002011-11-28T21:10:16.106-06:00A dream we sometimes wish we wouldn't want to ...A dream we sometimes wish we wouldn't want to wake up just yet!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-482145323606863842011-11-28T08:36:40.456-06:002011-11-28T08:36:40.456-06:00Wonderful sentiments !!!Wonderful sentiments !!!Kremohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12628650304437189952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-78264002831883357722011-11-27T21:45:43.902-06:002011-11-27T21:45:43.902-06:00Beautiful words. Dreams often lead us into some fo...Beautiful words. Dreams often lead us into some foolish paradise. I enjoyed your tender, beautiful piece.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-60666619143239929332011-11-27T17:39:38.016-06:002011-11-27T17:39:38.016-06:00Sometimes, when there's nothing else, shadows ...Sometimes, when there's nothing else, shadows are the best company. Well done.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2011/11/27/dream-farm-reprise/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-69300309690366810882011-11-27T11:28:40.233-06:002011-11-27T11:28:40.233-06:00Beautiful! Very nice poem, and a really good fit t...Beautiful! Very nice poem, and a really good fit to the prompt as well!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-57637979718051336632011-11-27T08:23:01.226-06:002011-11-27T08:23:01.226-06:00Nice poem, awesome. If I only had the moon as my c...Nice poem, awesome. If I only had the moon as my companion ... I would be so happy.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-83058812955006953062011-11-27T08:06:29.498-06:002011-11-27T08:06:29.498-06:00Nothing wrong ... because lovely dreams truning in...Nothing wrong ... because lovely dreams truning into reality are always better than reality turning into dreams..<br /><br />RS : )Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-53717515493468114602011-11-27T05:05:39.783-06:002011-11-27T05:05:39.783-06:00Sometimes it is sort of nice strolling through Foo...Sometimes it is sort of nice strolling through Fool's Paradise. It is the wakening that is such a jolt.Lisa at Greenbowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07743973292900758183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-43684931565463389792011-10-25T21:41:43.449-05:002011-10-25T21:41:43.449-05:00elegant.
:)elegant.<br /><br />:)Jingle Poetry At Olive Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14591535202657302861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-11037507476946523442011-10-25T14:12:57.139-05:002011-10-25T14:12:57.139-05:00Hello.
Visiting from The Poetry Pantry.
Beautiful...Hello.<br />Visiting from <a href="http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2011/10/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-72.html" rel="nofollow">The Poetry Pantry.</a><br /><br />Beautiful, albeit full of sadness & longing.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/10/undress-me-with-your-sultry-eyes.html" rel="nofollow">Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-51179009472688256922011-10-24T22:52:54.525-05:002011-10-24T22:52:54.525-05:00It's especially sad when you wake up and reali...It's especially sad when you wake up and realize that it was only a dream. I've had dreams like that--they can hit you hard.<br /><br />Very well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-15943597912301317742011-10-24T05:34:53.375-05:002011-10-24T05:34:53.375-05:00Sad, but beautiful - and very like a dream, which ...Sad, but beautiful - and very like a dream, which is not always the case.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-66294525890352747432011-10-23T17:20:10.114-05:002011-10-23T17:20:10.114-05:00The loneliness and yearning are palpable...The loneliness and yearning are palpable...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-5743985509335459152011-10-23T12:56:06.025-05:002011-10-23T12:56:06.025-05:00Very beautiful. "with only the moon for compa...Very beautiful. "with only the moon for company."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-12205252063966712222011-10-23T12:33:31.996-05:002011-10-23T12:33:31.996-05:00"All the lonely people," Eleanor Rigby (..."All the lonely people," Eleanor Rigby (Beatles)Good job!Wynne Huddlestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04809869881096185381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-15818002938831320652011-10-23T10:49:01.079-05:002011-10-23T10:49:01.079-05:00This is beautiful, if sad... Dreams do so often tu...This is beautiful, if sad... Dreams do so often turn out to be a "Fool's Paradise." The moon can be a lovely companion, but so much lovelier in the company of a real-life human one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-48761989692849544792011-10-23T09:46:34.109-05:002011-10-23T09:46:34.109-05:00I can feel your loneliness very strongly. Sometime...I can feel your loneliness very strongly. Sometimes even i really want companionship and i have an tendency to turn to my imagination. So your poem stuck a chord with me. <br />'I breathe in and out<br />searching the air for traces of you.'<br />Memorable lines. :)madhumakhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09624377766663002237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-62974892141523374802011-10-23T09:04:38.304-05:002011-10-23T09:04:38.304-05:00I too wonder if I'm destined to have nothing b...I too wonder if I'm destined to have nothing but the moon for company, Laura. The moon seems to be the only one never to complain about feeling lonely. <3 Beautiful writing. <3Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-24677193774530693162011-10-23T08:44:38.709-05:002011-10-23T08:44:38.709-05:00Poignant, sad. If only dreams would always come t...Poignant, sad. If only dreams would always come true......Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com