tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post3142874809993066021..comments2023-05-13T03:40:37.523-05:00Comments on Paper Thoughts: Thursday Think Tank - The CityLaura Mariahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-76397190105768901262011-12-23T11:24:45.991-06:002011-12-23T11:24:45.991-06:00Lovely poem! I have always wanted to go to Mexico...Lovely poem! I have always wanted to go to Mexico City. It looks like an amazing place.Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-45769753816434577512011-12-23T00:23:55.844-06:002011-12-23T00:23:55.844-06:00Incredible work,
Happy Holidays….
if you write Ha...Incredible work, <br />Happy Holidays….<br />if you write Haiku, welcome sharing with us, <br />1 to 3 or more are welcome.<br />no theme.<br />Hope to see you in,<br />Smiles!The Purple Treehousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18085238053875049021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-62594839549398769622011-12-23T00:23:46.395-06:002011-12-23T00:23:46.395-06:00vivid imagery.
smiles.vivid imagery.<br />smiles.The Purple Treehousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18085238053875049021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-2270001693698290292011-12-22T00:59:36.688-06:002011-12-22T00:59:36.688-06:00You made me go in nostalgia in a way about my old ...You made me go in nostalgia in a way about my old house :)<br />Loved it :)Lady Whispershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051384418188753857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-17311930984304743662011-12-21T21:20:34.727-06:002011-12-21T21:20:34.727-06:00very nice ... as if I was there too ...very nice ... as if I was there too ...Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-85775300724350788352011-12-21T16:57:16.759-06:002011-12-21T16:57:16.759-06:00You embrace the sensation of missing one's hom...You embrace the sensation of missing one's home and create a collage of all that makes it worthy of that emotion. Lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-65209248159358992982011-12-20T23:57:15.375-06:002011-12-20T23:57:15.375-06:00A bustling city that I would like to visit one day...A bustling city that I would like to visit one day. And perhaps you will return there one day. Thanks for sharing.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-11823045021361707422011-12-19T18:25:52.628-06:002011-12-19T18:25:52.628-06:00Somewhat similar to what we experience over here, ...Somewhat similar to what we experience over here, bustling city life on a smaller scale though.<br /><br />http://imagery77.blogspot.com/2011/12/rat-race.html<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-78708479542273069162011-12-12T13:29:17.329-06:002011-12-12T13:29:17.329-06:00your poem makes me see it, hear, smell, feel the h...your poem makes me see it, hear, smell, feel the high-paced, colorful life of its citizens - well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-77122846838886787162011-12-11T22:43:44.848-06:002011-12-11T22:43:44.848-06:00Thank you for the tour...I can almost smell the ch...Thank you for the tour...I can almost smell the churros...see the colors...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-71115429961154546212011-12-10T02:55:15.356-06:002011-12-10T02:55:15.356-06:00I'm a sucker for the remembrance of things pas...I'm a sucker for the remembrance of things past, and this is as good as it gets. You had my interest throughout. Great write.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-48974579701726470952011-12-09T22:34:41.568-06:002011-12-09T22:34:41.568-06:00Vivid! thank-you for the 'peek'.Vivid! thank-you for the 'peek'.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-81192544254618919722011-12-09T17:54:52.742-06:002011-12-09T17:54:52.742-06:00I love this — all the vividly created details — bu...I love this — all the vividly created details — but I think I would love it even more without the last line. If you think that information is needed, maybe it could go in earlier somewhere? Or could you say, 'the rush of 20 million feet'? Perhaps it is just the word 'existing' which becomes too clinical, and all you would need to do would be to drop that? For the rest, even though they are things you have been told, you convey them so well it seems you do remember, and you make me think I can see and hear and smell them too.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-81831875773200465752011-12-09T15:51:43.596-06:002011-12-09T15:51:43.596-06:00Amazing! This reminds me of my culture as well.
&...Amazing! This reminds me of my culture as well.<br /><br />"The smell of sweet churros hangs in the air<br />while tourists and street vendors haggle"<br />Vivid imagery!<br /><br />Erick FloresAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06838425722247850036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-49005362100514277112011-12-09T13:51:27.141-06:002011-12-09T13:51:27.141-06:00You took me there and I saw the swirl of colors!You took me there and I saw the swirl of colors!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-79007747710292194332011-12-09T05:47:39.030-06:002011-12-09T05:47:39.030-06:00Yes I agree with Ollie, your imagery flows so smoo...Yes I agree with Ollie, your imagery flows so smoothly it lets the reader become part of the memory.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-63104352647679548402011-12-08T23:06:02.804-06:002011-12-08T23:06:02.804-06:00Your poem echoes memories in that
it engages all t...Your poem echoes memories in that<br />it engages all the senses.Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12426662172298236416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-83456776231246117772011-12-08T20:22:00.699-06:002011-12-08T20:22:00.699-06:00Beautiful memories. I hope you will have an oppor...Beautiful memories. I hope you will have an opportunity to go back. I was in Mazatlan, Puerto Vallarta, and Cozumel. I know I would have also liked Mexico City@Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-31602370177730685502011-12-08T18:41:56.438-06:002011-12-08T18:41:56.438-06:00Nice - during this read...I was there in your city...Nice - during this read...I was there in your city.<br /><br />Thanks!Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-59066300401552425422011-12-08T12:52:19.773-06:002011-12-08T12:52:19.773-06:00Enjoyed this... I felt like I was there, too!Enjoyed this... I felt like I was there, too!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com