tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post2570711021916097155..comments2023-05-13T03:40:37.523-05:00Comments on Paper Thoughts: Two fat ladies - Write on WednesdayLaura Mariahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-5736899818968837822011-10-15T16:32:19.479-05:002011-10-15T16:32:19.479-05:00:)Old habits are die hard kill and to forget... Le...:)Old habits are die hard kill and to forget... Leaving a side the writting it's just... like... awesome the way you can make feel a emotion in a short history :)Mikhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680959756825128096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-22560607010988769522011-10-11T12:40:18.656-05:002011-10-11T12:40:18.656-05:00Relate able piece and beautifully written!Relate able piece and beautifully written!Marinelahttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-48874204438183519792011-10-10T12:49:27.408-05:002011-10-10T12:49:27.408-05:00Oh that last line "Running away was no use. H...Oh that last line "Running away was no use. Here she was without her family and still she felt trapped by them." Is so profound and so true. We carry it/them within us wherever we go. I really liked this piece.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-61015342887879003942011-10-07T20:14:00.223-05:002011-10-07T20:14:00.223-05:00I agree with everyone here, such a relatable piece...I agree with everyone here, such a relatable piece and really well written.Lenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-12994479771405329952011-10-07T06:47:22.634-05:002011-10-07T06:47:22.634-05:00Old habits do die hard don't they? I can rela...Old habits do die hard don't they? I can relate to this too in many ways.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-52332103402256488632011-10-05T22:49:54.473-05:002011-10-05T22:49:54.473-05:00I agree with the above comments. Such a simple sit...I agree with the above comments. Such a simple situation to relate to, yet you used it to display more complex emotions. Nice job in your writing.Kerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000402109977122989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-42632647289032296812011-10-05T22:42:31.214-05:002011-10-05T22:42:31.214-05:00Ahhhh... how easy it is to relate to this piece. ...Ahhhh... how easy it is to relate to this piece. Nicely done. :DKimberleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787970553045999626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-84246612577460745052011-10-05T21:07:44.591-05:002011-10-05T21:07:44.591-05:00Most can relate to being chained, in someway or an...Most can relate to being chained, in someway or another, to things we'd rather leave behind. I love how you used simple, everyday things to show deeper emotions. Nice job!Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2983270705805929763.post-76358996403708525822011-10-05T20:43:13.507-05:002011-10-05T20:43:13.507-05:00You have written about a simple but seemingly univ...You have written about a simple but seemingly universal thing. We do take our family with us in this way and I found myself identifying with bits along the way. The turning off of lights, doing things because it's simply the example you were set.You captured my interest. Glad you decided to join in - this was a great exercise.<br /><br />Gill xInkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.com